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    Jahman found someone to make payments on the apartment. It was someone we both went to high school with. Stevvon was a bit obnoxious. He copied off of Snoop Dogg in terms of hair and facial hair. I tried to be coo' with Stevvon but he always found a way to remind me why we didn't get along much in high school. He made a habit of stuntin' on me until I gave him the ice grill then he didn't try being funny again.

    Family even will stunt on you and... (continue reading)

     I was at Borders one day trying to find either Cliff Notes or Spark Notes, whichever publication had a breakdown of M. Butterfly by David Henry Hwang. I previously had been searching at Barnes & Nobles. Marvon was with me.

     I just knew what list of thoughts were jotted down in his head just by briefly scanning the expression on his face.

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