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  • Member Since:

    September 22, 2003

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    Female

  • Age:

    28

  • Relationship Status:

    Single

  • Last Login:

    January 08

  • Education:

    Certification

  • Location:

    Tallahassee, FL

  • Race:

    Black/African American

  • Zodiac:

    Pisces


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ATTENTION TO ALL>THIS IS JUST A QUICK UPDATE ON WHAT HAPPED TO ME...
BEFORE you read the poem, go to the left and pause the song...play it when you finish..
And so you know what I'm talking about in the poem, I broke my pelvis and socket in 4 places. (ouch)

Real Quick, I just wrote this poem so I'mma put it on here (I'll edit it later)
10/17/06

WRECKED


i plead the fifth
on why i need a fifth
on why i need to lift
my mind from this body of mine
i'm not even sure that this body is mine
or atleast this leg
i wish i could release this leg
my foot wont do what i'm tellin' it to
and if my hip had a mouth,
it would be yellin' too
but i'm glad
glad that no one chose to ride
in the back seat or the passenger side
cause everyone in the backseat would've died
sides, i had to climb out the passenger side
i was pushing on the door
so filled with adreniline
that i started moving trees
like a dude sellin timberlands
and what happened,
to all the everyday heros i see on t.v.
cause man in this crash,
it's just my a$$ and me
can I atleast get one person to see, this big-a$$ car,
on fire with the lights on
it wont cost that much,
just hit 9-1-1 up on a pay phone
i'll be so glad if the sherrif showed up
cause it's a gun in the trunk,
and I might get popped if the shells blowed up
i got, so hot, trying to crawl out the car
i swear hell showed up
but i tell yall what
if the white light and the angels come
I'mma play dumb
on why i need a fifth
or i might just plead the fifth
on why i need to lift
my soul from this body of mine
so from this day on,
I thank God for this body of mine


~~Tysen~~


{ oh yeah, if you can play chess (not just move pieces), let me know, thats a big plus}
And incase you are wondering, I cut my hair and the photo at the top is the most recent.

This is Tysen`s sista(Phatnfluffy),he told me I could write on his page so first of all,Aint my brother sweet letting me put all this B.S. on his page(we just tight like that.)To all the females out there, my brother is Sweet but don`t let him fool ya cause he`s a freak. He`s a protector but he lets me live my life . I`m sure he`s the same way when he`s "involved". Any way, he`s looking at me funny so I`m about to ride. Later.



Introducing My big brother Tysen:





I`ma just go on with my page like I dont see of that stuff she wrote up there:






I decided to take the B>S> off and put some really real shyt in its place. This is one of the few times I will ever break down what I`m feeling, so congradulations on being a witness: I can`t be any ones man anytime soon. It`s not that I dont want to, but I`m not TRULEY over my ex yet. I really fukking loved her you know? well the last thing in the world I want to do is to be holding my new girl and thinking about my old one. You all derserve more than that, and while I can`t give you that right now, I can give honesty. I have and love my four sisters, so I know women are emotional beings. But I`m so outgoing that not even they know the real as shyt I`ve been through. I`m not on the rebound though, that happened a minute ago.

I am looking for friends, but I`m not tryng to play with any ones emotions. Now that I`ve got that shyt off my chest, I`ll let this stay on here for a while and then I`ll re-do my page.



10/20/06

DO IT

i hope you dont mind
if i take my time
cause you're about to make me bust...
a rhyme...
that'll give four play to your mind
see, since you gave me the chance,
i'mma give you romance
and long before the trojans
we'll hold hands and slow dance.
girl tonight...
you will be my poetry
so i'mma kiss every verse slowly,
then lick every curve till it knows me
untill i have you about to
untill you say, " I'm about to"!!
and when you're about toooo...
thats when i'll make you!
.... Repeatedly


~~Tysen~~

............................YE AH...IT'S THAT GOOD!!

.............................. .I know I'm not immortal.
................ It's just sometimes I have to remind her I'm not.
.............................. Cause when we make love,
.............................. ........She be like
.............................. ..."OH MY GOD!!"
.............................. ......And I be like
.............................. ......... "Naw...
.............................. ....That's just me"

.............................. ....~~Tysen~~


p.s. I'm always up for sum spades and bid, so if you got ya A-GAME on, get at me.
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