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This mirrors a scene written by the incredible talented woman on BP that goes by the name -DA WONDERFUL ME- If you like this at all you should visit her page and see just how this all began. Since she wrote from the woman's point of view her scene goes back a little further then this one that is from the man's point of view. Enjoy

She came to me a broken fragment of the woman I knew her to be, but there was know way she would leave in that same condition. A combination of rain and tears cascaded down here face as she stood in my door way soaked to the bones. The fabric of the light dress she wore clung tightly to her body exposing every womanly curve that she posed. Even in this condition that would have made a normal woman seem less than she was, the woman before me stood as the picture of perfection. Her eyes spoke to a place deep within me and they simple said "Make me feel beautiful again, make me forget why I am standing here in the rain". She was shivering uncontrollable and it seemed quite apparent that the cause was far more then that of any of natures elements. Reaching out my hand she grabbed it as if she was a drowning victim at sea and my hand was a long awaited life line she had been struggling to reach. Beautifully manicured toes made contact with the hardwood floor just inside my threshold causing her every footstep to leave pooled footprints. It was not until that moment that I understood just the gravity of the situation as before me an angel stood barefoot with such tremendous pain reeling in her eyes. With out the slightest hesitation I took her trembling hand in my own and proceeded to lead her to the sunken living room were as if in anticipation the fire place stood read to be lit. As brilliant array of pure blue and a mixture of red-orange flames danced in the fireplace. Slowly removing ever wet article of clothing that had been tightly clinging to her gorgeous frame I tossed the wet garments aside. Moving with the utmost urgency I quickly retrieved a warm white cotton sheet that had been tumbling in the dryer and while gently laying her on the thick carpeted floor I wrapped the sheet around her body. Droplets of moister that remained on her honey caramel complexioned skin began to glisten as the glowing light illuminating from the fireplace became trapped in then like glass prisms. We communicated but in a strictly non-verbal language that was written like brail and spoken with nothing more then touches. Speaking with my hands I allowed the moist droplets which adorned her body to soak into my flesh as my fingers began to glide across her body. As she began to circum to my every touch I felt my very essence beginning to melt into the overpowering radiant glow she expelled. As if in tandem we began to consent to the lustful desires that were far more then just lustful longing but more like loving aspirations finally realized. Our bodies became like putty that was being reshaped in a whirlwind of shared emotions. Never before had I ever been instinctively in sink with a woman as I was at this very moment. With her back towards the rising flame and her sculptured body before me I gentle pulled her up onto her knees and tilted her head back. The arch which it caused her back to take on was artistic in its elegant perfection. For a moment I just admired ever detail of her body and etched it into my memory. Like the finest of wines I found my self in admiration of the lord's greatest creation. I traced her long graceful neck with kisses that were the essence of actions that speak louder then words. Continuing downward inching ever closer to a full bosom that awaited attention that I definitely planned to lavish it with. First I traced circles around her perky breast before squeezing them together just tight enough to engulf both nipples simultaneously. As I engulfed both nipples I felt then come to life swelling in my mouth under the pressure of my tongue. After what seemed like a mini-eternity of exploring the pleasurable tenderness of her perfect breast, it was time to introduce even more blissful satisfaction to prove that her non-verbal communications had been correctly interpreted. Letting one of her firm breast slide from my mouth she let out an almost inaudible sign of pleasure. Using little more then my thumb to gentle manipulated her clitoris a symphony of moans and gasp began to push forward squeezing through moisten lips. My manly hands began to explore the silky smooth texture of every inch of a body that had previously been unknown to me. Before long our hands are locked together in a lovers tangle as we commit to a first kiss worthy of building an entire relationship on. A kiss more then worthy of being the foundation of every single pleasure two people could have to offer one another. The salty taste of tears and fresh rain water was still heavy, yet erotically sweet on full lips that welcomed the intimacy of the moment. Our pounding hearts began to take on the same rhythm as two became one as the end of heart ache slowly begun. It is as if our souls cried out that it was time. I still can't remember when exactly I removed my cloths but wearing nothing more then our passion for one another our flesh became one. She rose effortlessly into my arms as my manhood slide into her pulsating treasure. Her moist lips parted like a velvet rope welcoming me as if I had been a long overdue guess arriving to a celebration in my honor. The heat of our bodies pressed firmly together silenced the chills which had formally run rampant throughout a now still body. Holding her as deeply as these arms could we romanced the movements of love together, and as the moment overtook her she began to cry and her tears dripping into my flesh. Tears caught by flesh recombine DNA transferring hidden desires along with torturous harmful actions done by a now past lover. Sanctuary found in the human nature of a new lover discovered right under eyes that were once to cloudy to see divine will at work. Her tears were now causing fragments of a wall that once circled this heart to come crumbling down with such force that our love making reached deeper depths then thought imaginable. She cried out with a pureness that was indescribable as her body began to explode with tremors that waved from an epicenter within her and that then traveled into me. When the tremors that coursed through our joined bodies subsided her weak body lay completely exhausted and depleted. Thinking of just how incredible this spontaneous and perfect encounter we had just shared was I laid her weak body on the twisted sheet, the very sheets that gave witness to what had just taken place. Brushing her silky sweat dampened hair from her angelic face I was compelled to kiss her on the forehead in order to make sure this was not just some fantastic hallucination that would vanish if I blinked. Feeling her instant absence ring out in my body the moment we separated, a longing now inside of me lifted her delicate body until we were entangle in an unyielding embrace. Engrossed in the moment we fell asleep in each others arms and dreamt ever word which we had to say in order to stamp this new found love into existence once we rose from our slumber.
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A mans wants turn to his needs which in time transformed into part of his life's necessities.......
As he remembers early morning phone calls which broke silence, requesting sessions of touch tactical performances........
Blue kisses placed expertly on flawless skin still capable of speaking with uncompromised words that refuse to release unusually natural beauty as if it were a captive......
Between the shaded kisses true love hangs in suspense certain that losing in this game is no longer an option.....
Little detail attempt to slip away but glued to the moment they become to important to be discharged.......
Bye is not a word that this vocabulary has grown accustomed to uttering when it comes to conversing with love........
Hidden behind locked doors this heart which had failed before is now granted a reprieve...........
Heartache blanketed with newly refurnished joy finds solace in loves eternal power.......
Joy brought as if it could be place in a picnic basket overflowing with cause to feast on its bounty........
Have to admit that free falling into the arm of love once again feels like re-living my first sensual encounter......
Dreams no longer fantasies, but truth because of miracles you have place on a table set for two......
Who knew you had such a romantic side to you.........
Had assumed the fear of reliving the past had me safe from falling in love again........
Once again the portion of the world that belongs to me has be deeded over to its irresistible magnetic tug........
Bonds birth miracles, that radiate with a reflection that translate the meaning of the word beauty.......
Tonight will refuse to make way for morning, while we take ownership of something that is timeless.......
Unlike candlelight beauty did not flick but remained illuminated constantly outshining the past........
Admitting to the vulnerability that comes with loving no longer a faced difficulty.........
Heart finally pasted back together after it had been ripped to peace by lust masquerading as something more......
Now introducing good loving better then most, knocking you off your feet, never bitter always sweet type love.....
What's came over me is a jet black haired beauty with almond eyes and a body that has descended from the skies.......
Used to being taking advantage of love was unsure when I initially approached......
Yet and still approach I did for past lessons have taught me a single simple truth......
You should never allow the beauty of love to walk away unescorted because unlike boomerangs there are time when it just refuses to come back after you have let it go.......
Needless to say I failed once before but now I do know.........
How to spot the beauty known to most simply as love..........

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