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EVERY WOMAN DESERVES A GOOD MAN TO TREAT HER RIGHT AND BEAT IT UP WHEN SHE NEEDS IT. BEN JACKSON I ABOUT TO LEARN HOW TO GIVE IT A BLACK EYE. HE'S LEARNING TO BE A FREAK

Chapter 1 HER STORY

Ange Stillman has been living with Ben Jackson for the last three years. They have a good relationship and he treats her better than she has ever been treated in her life. In fact the way he treats her causes her friends to be envious. Ben is a hopeless romantic and he does all the right things for her like write her poetry, give her warm bubble baths, show up on her job with roses and a smile so her friends at work can Hate on her. He's the consummate gentleman and she has special feelings for him but she doesn't love him. She's even thinking about leaving him.

Now most of you are thinking about now,
Why in the hell would she leave a man like that?
And the reason is a simple one. Ben doesn't know how to beat the puzzy up. He's a romantic soft loving man who is good with his tongue and has enough dic to satisfy a woman he just doesn't know how to give it to Ange the way she wants it.

Ange is a thick woman with a big azz and she has always liked to have a man put her on her knees, get in behind her and grind his dic into her so hard and fast that it sounds like there are twenty people in the bedroom fighting. She wants a man to put a bow in his back, grab both of her hips and hit the puzzy with hard fast long strokes until she can almost feel him in her stomach. In other words she wants to get up the next morning and have to walk carefully across the floor because her poor little puzzy has been stretched and phucked and stretched and phucked and just when she thought he was through he speeded up and stretched and phucked her some more. Now that's call beating the puzzy up and a lot of women like it.

Not all of them like it all the time like Ange but most of them like it at various times. Most women can't tell you when the feeling will hit them but they know it when they feel it and if the man can get it right she'll sleep like a baby the rest of the night and she may even get up in the morning and go to the kitchen with nothing but her robe on and cook the man some breakfast. Now you know you done got in it if you wake up and smell bacon and eggs cooking. That's what a good phucking will do for a woman.

For the past three months Ange has been thinking about leaving him and its hard for her especially because he is such a good man who does all the things a real man should do. He also has asked her to marry him several times but she has turned him down which has caused several big arguments between them. It's getting to the place that she just wants to be alone. Well her turning him down on his proposal is not the only reason they have fought. The last big fight came during one of their lovemaking sessions. There she was on her back with her eyes close enjoying Ben's lips on her puzzy. The man had skilz with his mouth. He had this thing he did where he wet his little finger and slid it in her %#&@$! while he opened his mouth and took as much of her puzzy in as he could. Then he would pressed his whole tongue against her love button and apply some pressure and rotate his whole head in a circular motion causing her to grind up at his face and making his finger spin around in her azz.

Now that was the shyt. She has been with this man for three years and he has been doing that to her every time they made love but it was so good that she never got enough of it. Of course it didn't hurt that the man was in great shape and could hold his breath for what seemed like hours. That was a good thing because every time he began rotating his head she would lock her legs around his head and place her hands behind his head and try to pull him all the way into her puzzy and the man never seemed to back up. He was like that little bunny. He just kept going and going and going and going until finally Ange would scream and fall back on the bed totally exhausted and if that was it she would be satisfied but it wasn't.

Then would come the part that she had grown to dislike. Ben would ease up her body and ease his dic into her and begins to move very slowly in and out like he was afraid he was going to hurt her. She didn't want romance right now she wanted long, hard, thick, pounding dic muscle. And it wasn't like he didn't have enough dic. The man had nine and a half inches of thick dic. She knows because one night before they made love she went into her kitchen, got her ruler and measured her man's dic and that was the exact measurement.

Now that was enough dic to make any woman happy but it doesn't do any good to have the car if the motor isn't working and that is what the problem was with Ben. No matter how she tried to explain it to him. Whether she said it nice or if she told him she wanted to be phucked hard he never changed the way he did it. Oh there were a few times he got it right and phucked her hard but just about the time it was getting good to her he always came and it was over.

This last time he started pumping and as per usual she closed her eyes and didn't move and he just clicked. He got up and stood over the bed,
What the hell is wrong with you? Look if there's someone else just tell me and get it over with.
There's no one else Ben I'm just a little tired.
Bullshyt. You're not too tried when you have your legs wrapped around my head but as soon as I try to get a little lovin you freeze up. There must be somebody else or you wouldn't be acting this way.
There's no one else Ben.
Then what's the problem?
I already told you what the problem is but you don't listen.
What did you tell me that I haven't listened to?
Ben I need more than what you're giving me.
What do you mean more? Then he stops for a minute and looks at Ange and before she can answer he answers for her,
Oh I know what you mean, you mean you want me to be a freak like that brother of yours with all those little sex toys and shyt. Always talking about how he puts them to sleep and what kinds of things he does to them. Well personally if you ask me I think he's gay and another thing if you would act like a woman more often and give me something to work with maybe I would give you more.
What the hell does my brother have to do with this? And if I were much more woman I wouldn't be with you because you can't handle the woman I am now.
Well go ahead on and leave then if that's the way you feel.
The conversation ended sometimes after that and they haven't talked since and that was two weeks ago. During that time she has made a decision. She's going to find her own apartment and move out of Ben's. She's tired of having sex with a man who doesn't know how to deliver properly and she's tired of making excuses for it. A week later she leaves Ben but not without them talking about it first. He's hurt that she's leaving him and he apologizes about the things he said but he doesn't try to stop her. He says he understands her decision but if and when she's ready to come back he'll have her. They hug and she leaves him by himself.

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